The visuals are beautiful, and the tutor is clearly very talented. She exhibits obvious experience with this topic, as well as discernible passion (she even made a poster!). Maybe this isn't very applicable since 1.) the topic isn't academic, and 2.) this is the tutor's first session, but I think it would be helpful if the tutor gave more thorough explanations. Why do these types of markers work? What materials don't work, and why? More information would be great, too. The presentation could greatly benefit from a few slides about the history and purposes of calligraphy. I would also recommend reading off the slides less, using them more as bullet points than a script (this is something I struggle with myself, and I've hosted quite a few sessions now).
Tutor · 11 mo. ago