I really appreciated how in-depth you went on the first slide and throughout the session, the explanations were clear and detailed, which made the concepts easy to understand. For example, when going over essay structure, you broke down each part step by step, which really showed a strong understanding of the topic.
One thing I think could be improved is increasing opportunities for learner discussion. While there was some built-in, I think more discussion or practice questions would help us actively apply what we’re learning instead of only listening.
Another small suggestion is with the slide design. On the first essay structure slide, you stayed on that one slide for quite a while. It might work better to spread that information across a few slides, this would make the pacing more engaging and also create natural breaks where interactive elements could be added.
Overall, your explanations, visuals, and examples were very strong, and I could tell you had a deep knowledge of the topic. With a little more interactivity and slide variety, the sessions could be even more impactful.
Tutor · 27 days ago
